This picture
was took in my last day of school in Denmark when I was in an intercultural exchange,
it was 3 years ago. The photographer was Laura the Danish friend from Gilda who
is the girl with the Mexican flag and my best friend, the people next to me
were also exchange students and my very good “ven” (the danish word for friend). That they we all
were supposed to bring ours flags but I totally forgot it, to many emotions
that day and many goods bay, I leaved the country some days after that moment. I
didn’t was the only one who forgot his flag, to Jeff the guy from Hong-Kong did also happened the same as
me, but in my cases I made Gilda angry. To me can see this picture again it
brings me back many good memories and also make me nostalgic for the greats
moments I spend with my friends over there, but also make me desire to can see
each one them again.

Wow Vicente, that experience should be gratifying.
ReplyDeleteCongratulations!
was took= was taken
ReplyDeletefriend, the= friend. The
we all were = we were all
leaved= left
To me can see= check coherence
make me nostalgic for the greats = makes me nostalgic for the great
also make me desire to can see= also makes me want to ... (second part I do not understand)
The text on the overall is clear, however the inconsistencies in terms of grammar make the final work somewhat difficult to follow at times.
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T: 2, L: 2, G: 2,5= 6,5 pts.
GRADE: 5.0